Elizabeth! Great job. From my vantage point, ALL the necessary components of an idea, and properly executed elevator pitch were included in your presentation. The initial hook gained my attention immediately. Your smile invited me in to want to listen more. Aesthetically, your camera was at the ideal height, background noise was nonexistent, and the room was light and bright. There really isn’t much more to be done here except sharpen the presentation somewhat. Most likely you were aware of the time constraints, and that became clear toward the end of the presentation where the energy was reduced. A strong finish is the only addition that would make this PERFECT!
Elizabeth! Great job. From my vantage point, ALL the necessary components of an idea, and properly executed elevator pitch were included in your presentation. The initial hook gained my attention immediately. Your smile invited me in to want to listen more. Aesthetically, your camera was at the ideal height, background noise was nonexistent, and the room was light and bright. There really isn’t much more to be done here except sharpen the presentation somewhat. Most likely you were aware of the time constraints, and that became clear toward the end of the presentation where the energy was reduced. A strong finish is the only addition that would make this PERFECT!
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