Reflection:
I received feedback on my last pitch and overall it was pretty positive. My peers said that I sounded natural, genuine, and authentic. They also mentioned how my elevator pitch felt natural. I was surprised by those comments because speaking isn't my strongest trait. I am glad to see that my peers enjoyed it.
Changes:
One of my peers suggested that I have the phone repair service come to students - I really liked this idea and decided to use it in my pitch. Another peer suggested adding a statistic. I have added both of these ideas into my business pitch.
Hey Elizabeth, Good job! I think it's great that you refined your pitch according to the feedback that you got on the last pitch. I saw your last pitch but I think you did a better job this time and it's very organized. Also, it's a god idea to add a statistic in your pitch. I think it makes your pitch more convincing and rational. Good post!
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